Live long and marry fic I've written a little fic- 1,300 words, and I'd love to get some feedback on it, and even a bit of beta help- if anyone is interested. I plan to submit it to the live long and marry anthology to help fight prop 8, and really I don't want to turn in something iffy and full of errors, so any and all help would be great. It is NC-17 if that helps :)